Outline
I. Introduction
II. Physiological defferences
III. Educational differences
IV. Sexual differences
V. Conclusion
First Draft
I. Introduction
II. Physiological defferences
III. Educational differences
IV. Sexual differences
V. Conclusion
First Draft
Why can not women be like men? Day by day it is increasing equality between men and women in society, we have the same rights, the same opportunities. Althought men and women share the same planet, they come from different world because they are extremelly differents in many aspects.
Men and women are different physiologically. When guys are in adolescence their shoulders widen, facial hair appears and their voice is deeper. Male skin has more sebaceous and sweat glands that provoke a strong smell. While in girls their breasts and hips grow, and their pelvis widen. The feminine skin is more delicate and receptive to touch.
Another difference is in education. Guys suffer more punishments than girls because if a boy acts wrong, the mother tends to punish him. About school, boys have worse grades and they suffer more disorders related to writing and language according to pedagogues. In contrast to guys, if a girl acts wrong, the mother explain her the mistake because a girl is more fragile emotionally . In school girls are who excel in better behavior and grades.
The last difference is sexually. Men appreciate more the physical atractive and chastity due to there is an area of the hypothalamus ( organ of the brain that determines sexual behavior) that has the double size in men. Unlike men, women have a sexual interest related to affection that they feel for someone because women look for stability.
Even though there are physiological, educational, and sexual differences between both genders, we have something in common, we share the same rights,the same opportunities, the same planet.
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Final Draft
Final Draft
Why can not women be like men? Day by day it is increasing equality between men and women in society; we have the same rights, the same opportunities. Althought men and women share the same planet; they come from different world because they are extremelly differents in many aspects.
Men and women are different physiologically. When guys are in adolescence their shoulders widen, facial hair appears and their voice is deeper. Male skin has more sebaceous and sweat glands that provoke a strong smell. While in girls their breasts and hips grow, and their pelvis widen. The feminine skin is more delicate and receptive to touch.
Another difference is in education. Guys suffer more punishments than girls because if a boy acts wrong, the mother tends to punish him. About school, boys have worse grades and they suffer more disorders related to writing and language according to pedagogues. In contrast to guys, if a girl acts wrong, the mother explain her the mistake because a girl is more fragile emotionally. In school girls are who excel in better behavior and grades.
The last difference is sexually. Men appreciate more the physical atractive and chastity due to there is an area of the hypothalamus (organ of the brain that determines sexual behavior) that has the double size in men. Unlike men, women have a sexual interest related to affection that they feel for someone because women look for stability.
Even though there are physiological, educational, and sexual differences between both genders, we have something in common; we share the same rights, the same opportunities, and the same planet.
Men and women are different physiologically. When guys are in adolescence their shoulders widen, facial hair appears and their voice is deeper. Male skin has more sebaceous and sweat glands that provoke a strong smell. While in girls their breasts and hips grow, and their pelvis widen. The feminine skin is more delicate and receptive to touch.
Another difference is in education. Guys suffer more punishments than girls because if a boy acts wrong, the mother tends to punish him. About school, boys have worse grades and they suffer more disorders related to writing and language according to pedagogues. In contrast to guys, if a girl acts wrong, the mother explain her the mistake because a girl is more fragile emotionally. In school girls are who excel in better behavior and grades.
The last difference is sexually. Men appreciate more the physical atractive and chastity due to there is an area of the hypothalamus (organ of the brain that determines sexual behavior) that has the double size in men. Unlike men, women have a sexual interest related to affection that they feel for someone because women look for stability.
Even though there are physiological, educational, and sexual differences between both genders, we have something in common; we share the same rights, the same opportunities, and the same planet.