♥•My best friend•♥

Outline

I. Introduction.
II. My best friend´s appearance.
III. My best friend´s personality.
IV. My feelings for my best friend.
V. Conclusion.

My First Draft

What has your best gift been being? Since we are children, we dream to have the best; it is so much the obsession that we not forget any detail. I was lucky because God gave me as a gift my best friend. I am grateful with my heaven  gift; I love each particle of her because she is full of magic.

Her stream line features are as beautiful as the sunset; her skin is autumnal: golden and brown. It is embellished with precious stones that shine in step with of the moon. Her hair is a delicate tempting chocolate waterfull that trickes her back that provoke admiration to anyone. Her eyes are like two sparkling amber diamonds; her soft pink cheeks are like a baby´s bottoms. Smooth and fragile lips as the petals of a flower, wet white teeth like the clouds. Her figure as a goddess and her hands are like the hands of an angel.

She is a reflection of the virgin; pure, tender, and sincere. She has a marvelous heart; her emotions are as sweet as honey. The four elements describe her character; kind-hearted as fire, calm as water, strong as earth, and fresh as air. Protective as a lioness; she cares for her children and husband. She is a jolly smiling person; her voice is an angelic singing that give you peace and harmony. As plucky as a warrior; you will never see her defeated. Moreover, she is self-assured; she gets what she proposes since she never gives up.

 

She has always been with me in the beautiful and stormy moments of my life. She make me smile when I need it; she disappears the tears of my cheeks. Her tips are very helpful for my welfare; she has never betrayed me, she has never forgotten me. She is like a big wool coat; she warms me, and protects me. I feel completed when I am close to her. She gave me life; she is my angel who watches over my dreams, who lights my way.

That is my best gift; it is the best that I have. I will never change her for anything or anyone because with her physical and spiritual beauty makes my life full of love, peace, and hope. She is my role model, she is my heroe, she is my idol, she is my best friend, and she is my mom.

♣♣

My Second Draft

Which has been the greatest gift that you have received? Since we are children, we dream to have the best for birthday or christmas; it is so much the obsession that we do not forget any detail about it. I was lucky before born; God gave me as a gift my best friend. I am grateful with my heaven´s gift; I love each particle of her because she is full of magic.

Her stream line delicate features are as beautiful as the sunset; her skin is a golden brown tone with precious black stones that shine in step with of the moon. Her hair is like a sweet chocolate waterfall that tricks her back provoking admiration to anyone. Her eyes are as alluring as two sparkling amber diamonds; her soft round pink cheeks are like baby´s bottoms. Smooth and fragile lips as the petals of a flower, wet white teeth like the clouds. Her figure as a goddess and her hands are like the hands of an angel.

She is a reflection of the virgin Mary; pure, tender, and sincere. She has a marvelous heart; her emotions are as sweet as honey. The four elements describe her character; kind-hearted as fire, calm as water, strong as earth, and fresh as air. Protective as a lioness; she cares for her children and husband. She is a jolly smiling person; her voice is an angelic singing that gives you peace and harmony. As plucky as a warrior; you will never see her defeated. Moreover, she is self-assured; she gets what she proposes since she never gives up.

 

She has always been with me in the beautiful and stormy moments of my life. She makes me smile when I need it; she disappears the tears that runs down my cheeks. Her tips are very helpful for my well-being; she has never betrayed me, she has never forgotten me. She is like a big wool coat; she warms me, and protects me. I feel compleate when I am close to her. She gave me life; she is my angel who watches over my dreams, who lights my way.

That is my best gift; it is the best that I have. I will never change her for anything or anyone because with her physical and spiritual beauty makes my life full of love, peace, and hope. She is my role model, she is my hero, she is my idol, she is my best friend, and she is my mom.

 ♣♣

Final Draft

Which has been the greatest gift that you have received? Since we are children, we dream to have the best for our birthday or Christmas; it is so much the obsession that we do not forget any detail about it. I was lucky before I was born, God gave me as a gift my best friend. I am grateful with my heaven´s gift; I love each particle of her because she is full of magic.

Her delicate fine facial features are as beautiful as the sunset; her skin is a golden brown tone with precious black stones that shine in step with of the moon. Her hair is like a sweet chocolate waterful that trickes her back provoking admiration to anyone. Her eyes are as alluring as two sparkling amber diamonds; her soft round pink cheeks are like baby´s bottoms. Smooth and fragile lips as the petals of a flower; wet white teeth like the clouds. Her figure resembles a goddess, and her hands are like the hands of an angel.

She is a reflection of the Virgen Mary; pure, tender, and sincere. She has a marvelous heart; her emotions are as sweet as honey. The four elements describe her character; kind-hearted as fire, calm as water, strong as earth, and fresh as air. Protective as a lioness; she cares for her children and husband. She is a jolly smiling person; her voice is an angelic singing that gives you peace and harmony. As plucky as a warrior; you will never see her defeated. Moreover, she is self-assured; she gets what she proposes since she never gives up.

She has always been with me in the beautiful and stormy moments of my life. She makes me smile when I need it; she disappears the tears that run down my cheeks. Her advice are very helpful for my well-being; she has never betrayed me, she has never forgotten me. She is like a big wool coat; she warms me, and protects me. I feel complete when I am close to her. She gave me life; she is my angel who watches over my dreams, who lights my way. 

That is my best gift; it is the best that I have. I will never change her for anything or anyone because with her physical and spiritual beauty makes my life full of love, peace, and hope. She is my role model, she is my heroe, she is my idol, she is my best friend, and she is my mom.